Welcome, Daisy!
Many
thanks for inviting me onto your Blog Rosanna, it’s a pleasure to be here.
Hello
everyone.
One of the things I am concentrating on, in my
writing, is developing the sensuality aspect of my characters. My challenge is
using all of the senses. I am working on describing for the reader the impact
made by the impossibly attractive person my hero or heroine are about to fall
in love with. Their discovery of one individual they are unable to resist
prompts a range of responses, and I want the reader to experience these with
the characters.
This
attraction and reaction is a known sensation and often, though not always,
begins at first sight. Sometimes the effect can be so dramatic it is
uncomfortable, sometimes people get prickly because they no longer feel in
control, and at other times people stare awestruck and become embarrassed at
showing such a focus. There are other reactions too. People can suffer sweaty
palms, a dry mouth; find speaking difficult, queasy stomach and even physical
shakes. Some of these reactions are unpleasant, and can cause grouchiness and
anger too.
From
there in my story I might move on to the first touch of someone’s hand. People
do shake hands in greeting in formal situations, and I wonder how that might
feel for someone deeply attracted to another, in a business situation, or a
legal situation, or a medical situation. Perhaps the first touch might be
accidental, or it could be quite deliberate. There is a great deal to consider
about the impact of the first touch.
From the
first touch the story moves on, perhaps to a date, or any other opportunity for
characters to become more intimate. The situation will develop into the drama
of the couple’s first kiss.
I read
somewhere if the first kiss in a story is not satisfying for the reader; it is
at that point they may put your book down, and no writer wants that to happen.
Who really wants a boring kiss? Below I’ve put two examples of kisses from two
of my stories.
I hope you enjoy these kisses and find them…satisfying. I would
also like to invite you to follow my blog http://daisybanks.wordpress.com/ where there will be more examples of kisses in the next few weeks
as other authors demo kisses for readers.
This example kiss is from A Perfect Match, due out this summer
with Taliesin Publishing. I am awaiting the artwork for this book and will share
it with you soon.
This is
the heroine’s first ever kiss.
“Oh.” The sound escaped Anwell as he brushed his
lips against hers. “I’ll not be afraid, Varon.” She touched her lips to his. “I
think I’d like it if you kissed me.”
His smile appeared again. He covered her lips
with his. Warm, smooth and gentle they captured hers and the tip of his tongue
teased until she opened her mouth with a sigh.
Yes, I do like this, very much.
Sparks of tingling awareness rose. She edged
closer and leaned in to him. The warmth of his palm cupped her buttock, and his
tongue entered her mouth, sending a thrill deep into her. Should his
kiss make her feel like this? A soft moan she couldn’t stifle rose and she
lifted her arms around his neck.
How was it his mouth on hers could create such a
need to be closer still?
I hope you felt the sense
of discovery of Anwell and Varon’s kiss.
The next kiss is from Timeless. Available now
from Lyrical Press, A Kensington Imprint. You can meet these characters again
in the sequel To Eternity coming soon.
Sian and Magnus share their kiss in the garden.
Soft, delicate as a flower, she opened her lips
under the caress of his, and she tasted sweet, minty fresh. His rising need
deepened with their kiss, so he took command of her mouth, instructed her with
exquisite precision in exactly what he hoped for from her. The increase in her
breathing rate and her sighed responses promised him her participation would be
all he could wish.
The force of her will astonished him. For two
nights she’d fought him off, banished him from her dreams with ease. Even when
he’d managed to sneak in, she’d caged him. Today, she’d held him off every step
of the way to the lake. She wanted him, he was certain, but didn’t want to give
in, not this soon. She’d tested him and all his skills. But now, at last, he’d
managed to slip through her defenses because she embraced him to her, nestled
against him in the place she belonged. Her love of beauty, no less than his,
left her vulnerable.
The sound of her breathy moans encouraged him to
slide and roll his tongue with hers. Desire flashed deep in his gut.
Dreams would live. They throbbed through him.
I hope you found the sense
of how lucky Magnus feels to be able to enjoy this kiss. There is a buy link in
the image above.
Today I am also talking about sensual kisses at The Silken Sheets
and Seduction blog. If you’re over 18 do drop by.
You can find me on the web here.
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Daisy Banks.
An obsessive writer Daisy is passionate about
her stories. Her wish is to always offer the best tale she can to readers.
Daisy is married, with two grown up sons. She lives with her husband in a converted
chapel in Shropshire, England. Antiques and collecting entertain Daisy when she
isn’t writing, she has also occasionally been known to make a meal that doesn’t
stick to the pan.
Great kiss!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed, Tif.
ReplyDeleteto be held in loving arms while you kiss is a magical wxperience
ReplyDeleteI agree, Julie. I'm working hard so I can show the tenderness as well as the passion in kisses.
ReplyDeleteI love first kisses, and you do write some great ones. Do you remember that scene in 50 First Dates when Drew Barrymore says "best first kiss ever" or something like that. Priceless! Thanks for sharing, Daisy.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Gemma. Glad you enjoyed them.
ReplyDeleteHi Daisy, I enjoyed your blog. First kisses can make or break a relationship. Right? Your first kiss examples were hot and I'm sure long lasting. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteReally sensual kiss. Great post, Daisy.
ReplyDeleteKay
Love Bites and Silk Ties
Thanks so much, jj, I'm glad you enjoyed the excerpts.
ReplyDeleteHi Kay, thanks so much for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the kiss.
ReplyDeleteThank you for inviting me to the blog, Roseanna. I've enjoyed being here.
ReplyDeleteDelicious cover and great excerpt. I'm hopping on over to Silken Sheets to seeabout these kisses
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